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Summary: Past Featured Story

The youngest member of the Backstreet Boys has a secret. Discover Nick Carter's Other Side.

Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Drama, Supernatural
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 43034
Read Count: 63512


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09/02/11 » Updated: 08/31/14
Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/12/13 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Drugs and Sex

I kinda get why Brian would ask Nick that question. Not because he doesn't trust him but only because he is worried. And he kinda has the right to be worried since, from an outsider point of view, Nick's behaviour can be seen as strange. 

Aj. Well, Aj is Aj! So of course he's gonna be worried more about the fact that Nick doesn't have sex with fans anymore! 



Author's Response: Yes. Nick's behavior changed a lot since his birthday, and the guys thought he was up to no good again. They are just worried because they love Nick. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Craziness should stop!

This Gary ghost's situation is interesting and I like the fact that he could be influenced by Micheal. 



Author's Response: Thank you, and by this time, I think you know if Gary is related to Michael or not. Thanks for still reading. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Gary, Leo and the truth...

Good chapter. 

I'm still reading and waiting to find out something more about this Micheal, I don't remember if you have already said if he is a ghost or someone like Nick, able to talk to ghost but not wanting them to go into the light. Interesting the fact that he wants Nick dead, because obviously Nick is an obstacle to his plan. 



Author's Response: After reading your review, I tried to remember if I did say Michael is a ghost before this chapter. All I could think of was I mentioned him in One of the first mission's chapter that he taught Patty how to go from one place to another. Maybe I should have made it clear that he was a ghost trying to convince other souls not to cross over. Thanks for pointing that out and for still reading. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/17/13 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Earrings

Aww, Max is really a sweet ghost. And yes, I think that his unfinished business if realted to the other ghost. It's like he is her protector. 



Author's Response: I love Max, too. If there is a way for his character to come back, I would do it. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/22/13 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Mrs. Debbie Jenkins

Though I'm not very fond of chapters with pictures instead than descriptions, I admit that I loved the story behind the earing. Really sweet and romantic. Actually, I think that is one of the strenght of the story, the backstory behind every ghost. It mustn't been easy coming up with an original one for each of them. 



Author's Response: I tried to describe the earrings but I felt it was not enough. The earrings was very beautiful and I wanted the readers to see the earrings just like I do. Yes, it's not easy to come up with characters especially I am trying not to have a character or story same with ghost whisperer. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/22/13 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Kaitlyn Jade Harris

Strange and interesting way of ending the chapter. The heavy breathing usually doesn't mean good news. lol



Author's Response: I know. I tried ending a chapter with something that would make readers want for more, and I think it worked a little. Lol thanks!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Max, Debbie and the Light

Oh no, poor Nick: got caught while talking to someone who doesn't exist anymore. LOL I don't know why but it's a funny image to me. LOL



Author's Response: It's actually funny... Nick is one of those guys you wouldn't catch talking to himself. lol Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Mini Reunion

Wow. I didn't expect this twist. And yay for finally Micheal doing something. lol 



Author's Response: LOL you really like Michael... I hope I'll get the time and inspiration to write again. Michael is set be on the next chapters. thanks for the love for Michael. lol

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26 - Valentine's Day

Awwww....

I think that my favorite part is when Nick gave Andrea a flower. Really sweet. Can ghost have relationship? LOL That can be another idea for a story! lol

But really a sweet chapter. ^__^



Author's Response: Yes, that would be a good idea for another story. I think it's really sweet too. Nick loves Andrea but as his guardian. No relationship for Nick and Andrea on this story. lol

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - George

Oh, finally we know more about Micheal and his history, as well as reason why he doesn't want ghosts to cross over.

I love his backstory. It's realistic and you kinda feel for him because all he wanted was to be with his wife and, guessing that someone made her cross over, now he kinda wants his revenge. 

Great job with this chapter! ^__^



Author's Response: Aww thank you. I hope I conveyed the message that Michael is just a broken soul who wants revenge, that he is not a powerful one sent by the devils or whatever. Though, he seems powerful because he already learned almost everything that a ghost can do. Thanks for the review. I'm glad Michael didn't disappoint you. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Valentine's Day part 2

The girl was kinda frightning. 

I wonder how things would go for Nick and Kate since she still doesn't know Nick's secret life. 



Author's Response: As much as I want to write a detailed relationship about Nick and Kate, I think this story is better off without too much romance. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter - Traffic Lights

Okay, the girl was scaring but poor girl. :( Wonder why she can't leave that spot. Maybe something related to the accident?



Author's Response: Your question was probably answered in the next chapter. Yes, poor Vicky (I hope I remembered her name right.)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - A day after funeral

Oh, I love this twist! 
I didn't realize/understand that the past chapters were Nick's telling Brian about his secret life! Great job for this twist, I really liked it. ^__^
And hello Brian! lol Long time!! 

I get why Nick wants to give up. Everyone would be angry, especially since all the work he had done for the ghost and against Micheal. 



Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it. Remember that chapter when Brian went home with Nick and he said he's ready to listen but not promising Nick he would believe? Nick has been telling the story all along. Nick was mad because Kate crossed over so quick. He couldn't understand why Kate doesn't want to stay knowing Nick could see and talk to her. Plus, Leila told him Michael has something to do with the accident and he believed her.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Henrietta

Oh... Henrietta. ;(

Nick was sure lucky to have found someone who believed him and his gift. 

And hello back Brian! It's always good to see you again. LOL



Author's Response: Yes, Nick was really lucky. Can't wait to find out if you'll like Henrietta in the next chapters as well. lol

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/26/13 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - First Time

Poor Nick. Hospitals aren't funny and easy to deal with if you are a "normal" people, but as someone who can see ghosts they must be even harder to deal with. 



Author's Response: Hopefully, Nick will get used to hospitals. lol