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Summary: Past Featured Story

The youngest member of the Backstreet Boys has a secret. Discover Nick Carter's Other Side.

Categories: Fanfiction > Backstreet Boys
Characters: Group, Nick
Genres: Drama, Supernatural
Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 43034
Read Count: 63089


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09/02/11 » Updated: 08/31/14
Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/14/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Time to let go

I love how you manage to slip in a little bit information about the ghost's life here on Earth: one would think that it shouldn't be that hard, they're ghost. Still, I kinda feel for them, forced to stay by one's side but not being able to do nothing for them. 

I love the little parts about the other guys and how they helped Nick. And I'm glad that Brian is willing to give Nick some credits about the whole ghost story. 



Author's Response: This is one of my favorite chapter, I almost cried writing this one. Thank you for the appreciation.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/17/13 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Silver Anniversary

It was a fun chapter, sort of a preparation of what is coming next, I think.

The silver anniversary, that's really fun. Only Nick would come up with something like that. 



Author's Response: I'm happy that you're enjoying reading this one. Thank you.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/17/13 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - First Mission..... Part 1

Oh man, what a start for a first mission! A fan! lol And an Howie girl! 

I likw how it goes from funny things to serious stuff naturally. I'm not a fan of stories told in first person but, for this kind of story, it suits perfectly. 



Author's Response: I like writing in third person POV but I think this story is better with first person. Thank you!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - First Mission..... Part 2

Poor Patricia. ç_ç Her story is really sad, stuck where she died without even somewhere to go (i guess she can't go towards the light until she knows that her family moves on, right?).

And poor Nick. Between finding hard to believe that he can see ghost and wanting to help her,he's struck as well. 



Author's Response: Yes! that's what's holding her back, she wants her Mommy to know she's gone. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - First Mission..... Part 3

I knew Nick wouldn't do nothing for Patty. 

Mh... I wonder who that Micheal is. And, especially, why he appeared only now and not during those four years.

Just a question. Why was Patty's body still unclaimed? Didn't she has some kind of ID to enter the concert? 

Aside that, great chapter! ^__^ I'm really liking the story, even though it's a Nick's story. lol



Author's Response: You'll know more about Michael soon! and to answer your question, I must have not thought about that part carefully. In the Philippines, where I came from, we dont need ID to enter for a concert, unless of course we're claiming a VIP package. Patty's ticket was not front row. I should have mentioned she left her bag somewhere. Thanks for asking about that. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/22/13 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - First Mission..... Part 4

Ok, I found the answer for my previous question. lol

It mustn't be easy for Nick, I don't know if I'll be able to do what he's going to do. You'll never get used to this kind of things. 

LMAO at Brian and his joke about the invisible girlfriend. lol



Author's Response: I love that invisible girlfriend joke, too. For a second, I told myself I was genius when I came up with that. lol. Thank you!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/25/13 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - First Mission..... Part 5

Aw, Nick's message in the end was so sweet! 

 



Author's Response: I agree. I think Nick matured a little because of Patty. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 06/25/13 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Mr. Big Ben.... Part 1

Wow.

This was really really sad. I would have loved to see and read how they remembered him but I know it wasn't really the main point of the chapter and of the mission. 



Author's Response: I love Mr. Big Ben. I didn't try to write that part because I was afraid I wouldn't give justice to that beautiful moment. thanks for all your feedback. They are all much appreciated. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/03/13 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Mr. Big Ben..... Part 2

Awwww...this chapter was really sweet. I teared up a little about Ben and the gift for his wife. True love even after death.

And second aww for Brian, always defending Nick. lol



Author's Response: I love some Frick and Frack moment sometimes... even though I'm an A-rok girl. lol Thanks for still reading. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/08/13 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Brian's 30th... and Michael who?

What a cliffhanger!

And, poor Brian, what a birthday! lol

It's interesting this new power that Nick has discovered to possess. As I said, I'm really loving the plotline. 



Author's Response: It's good to know that you're still into the story. Thank you very much,

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/08/13 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Andrea

Interesting chapter. New informations, though they're still a little bit vague.

I don't know if you are going to talk about it in the future chaps but I'm trying to figure it out what it means when Andrea said that Micheal is a broken soul. I guess that, just like every "battle", there has to be the good side and the bad side and what had pushed Micheal to chose one instead than the other. (I admit that sometimes I prefer villain rather than the heroes because there is so much more work to build them as characters. Great characters.)

I'm so loving all those little things between Brian and Nick. lol Only Brian can know when Nick is lying or not. lol



Author's Response: I love how you write a review. It's very honest and straightforward. Thank you for that. Your reviews are very well appreciated. :) I really find it hard to write a story with a little bit of mystery. I don't know if I have given just enough information. Sometimes, because you dont want to give away too much, you restrict the details in the story not knowing it comes off as a little vague to the readers. I hope all your questions will be answered soon. :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/10/13 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Mr. Carter, please help me.....

Well, it was bound to happen sooner or later. There have to be someone who wouldn't believe Nick while saying "I can see ghosts". I'll probably react in the same way, thinking that either he's crazy or he has been paid to play a joke on me. 

Now it's gonna be interesting to see how Nick will try to change James' mind and make him believing in him.



Author's Response: Yes. Not everyone believes in ghost, I figured someone has to make it hard for Nick. I hope the next chapter is believable enough. Thank you!

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/10/13 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Princess Boo Boo

I teared up a little, little kids and girls always make me cry. It was really sweet.

Mh... this Micheal is really interesting. I'm already imaging an epic battle between him and Nick. lol



Author's Response: Awww thank you. As a mother I am really careful when writing about children. This chapter made me sad while I was typing it.

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/10/13 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - That was close!

Mh... another ghost and not too much nice.

Can't wait to know what it's his story! 



Author's Response: Happy that you're still interested. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: mamogirl Signed
Date: 07/10/13 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Leo

Ohhh, an angry ghost searching for his revenge. I love it! lol

Poor Nick that is in the middle of his revenge, though. lol



Author's Response: I figured Nick should meet an angry one. Lol thank you for still reading. :)